tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post1272432392215909614..comments2023-08-24T05:35:37.999-07:00Comments on YA for the YAt Heart: Tuesday's Tempting Teaser #2Melaniehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03696084321447737813noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-26676947095447269332010-09-01T07:53:51.382-07:002010-09-01T07:53:51.382-07:00Thank you so much Vee! And I LOVED your teaser! Th...Thank you so much Vee! And I LOVED your teaser! Thanks for comin' over and commenting. :-) I think I've said this to you before, but I'm so in awe of your talent...and so young (walks away sucking teeth and shaking head, trying to remember what the H E double hockey sticks I was doin' with myself at 17...nuttin') :-)Melaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03696084321447737813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-5216990872431030942010-09-01T06:54:09.757-07:002010-09-01T06:54:09.757-07:00I LOVE THIS. The concept is super creative and the...I LOVE THIS. The concept is super creative and the conflict between the MC and "Skinny Skylar" at the end was great. Loving the voice, too.Veehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03844706436726113433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-81720028402349489492010-09-01T05:54:54.454-07:002010-09-01T05:54:54.454-07:00Okay, I totally meant to say "pig" not &...Okay, I totally meant to say "pig" not "pic." That's what I get for trying to respond before my coffee.Melaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03696084321447737813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-20832186358242571262010-09-01T05:53:49.746-07:002010-09-01T05:53:49.746-07:00hahaha, "That ginormous schlong will still ha...hahaha, "That ginormous schlong will still have a jerk on the other end." Angelica, I might just have to add that into my ms! :-) And yeah...Brian is a pic. Bleh. Sad to think there are characters out there like him hehe.<br /><br />Ellen, thanks for commenting. Harriet the Spy, haha. That brings back some memories. Aack. I'm too friggin' old dang it.Melaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03696084321447737813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-81713709127241595292010-08-31T21:01:41.378-07:002010-08-31T21:01:41.378-07:00Too bad Brian can't switch personalities as ea...Too bad Brian can't switch personalities as easily as he can switch body parts! That ginormous schlong will still have a jerk on the other end (I almost said ass on the other end, LOL)<br /><br />Glad you liked my post from yesterday on my blog.Angelica R. Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09448717076699744259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-86389597499880406032010-08-31T18:30:07.899-07:002010-08-31T18:30:07.899-07:00This MC reminds me of a telepathic Harriet the Spy...This MC reminds me of a telepathic Harriet the Spy :) Nosy, but in a good way, cause you're interested in it all! heheEllenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17202494819302527977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-31940559822389409892010-08-31T14:55:12.580-07:002010-08-31T14:55:12.580-07:00THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU guys!!
And Angie...THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU guys!! <br /><br />And Angie, Ouch...that towel whip on my butt hurt. I promise I'm going to finish the darn thing (by the end of next week I've given myself or I'm going to be grounded and I won't be allowed to eat chocolate or rainbow twizlers for a month! :-))Melaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03696084321447737813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-20160594490140530452010-08-31T13:59:45.192-07:002010-08-31T13:59:45.192-07:00This is one of my favorite scenes - so creative!! ...This is one of my favorite scenes - so creative!! I'm tempted to go back and re-read the whole ms after reading your teasers - and i probably will once you're done. So get going little girl and finish this thing!!Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12526875813399934443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-25463625183478610282010-08-31T12:13:58.519-07:002010-08-31T12:13:58.519-07:00Great teaser! I really like your MC's voice an...Great teaser! I really like your MC's voice and the ideas behind your novel are fascinating. Woo hoo!Joann Swansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16887227115980242205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-34594621594226755352010-08-31T12:12:29.792-07:002010-08-31T12:12:29.792-07:00Heh, loved the ending, the sudden onslaught of ner...Heh, loved the ending, the sudden onslaught of nervousness around Josh while still listening to Skinny and her realization.<br /><br />Good job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-85114513501940905052010-08-31T11:34:24.859-07:002010-08-31T11:34:24.859-07:00*giggles* Ah the inner workings of the teenage min...*giggles* Ah the inner workings of the teenage mind captured so beautifully. I o enjoy reading your teases.Fionahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17890775614132785654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-54150145920848910792010-08-31T06:01:47.251-07:002010-08-31T06:01:47.251-07:00oohh Mindreader awesome, the thoughts seem so natu...oohh Mindreader awesome, the thoughts seem so natural and the voice is perfect, nice teaseAlyce Haasthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15611165171858505203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1692998196257456390.post-61151216070493694962010-08-31T05:02:10.045-07:002010-08-31T05:02:10.045-07:00haha. great teaser mel. reminds me of those first ...haha. great teaser mel. reminds me of those first beginning chapters where i fell in love with Sam's voice.<br /><br />Love it.Nomeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07995363401476834241noreply@blogger.com